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The Very First Murder

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The very first envy
The very first spite
In that uglly field my brothe r I did smite

The very first hatered
The very first rage
The very first brother sendng brother to the grave

The very first  *MURDER*
The very first kill
Oh, my hands fore ever marked by blood I spilled

I am the very first killer
But would you believe...
When that deed was done, I felt the very first greef?
This is a song I wrote based on the story of Cain and able, and it is about what was going on inside of Cane's head on the day that he lured Able into the field and slwe him, is it what you would expect or are there surprises? this song is for a part of a video game that I have made that is about Cane and Able, and you will be abel to play it soon.
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AARtistWannabe's avatar
Great rhyme and rhythm here. It also reminds me of another soap plot of a man who killed his brother.